Write about this short story. Include details that let me know you read the story. Comment on the key points as well as the style of the story. What do you think about the message of the story? Do you agree that this is true about teeenagers? It is alright to comment on what someone else has said but no put downs. Make sure to sign your work so you get credit. Some use of internet shorthand is ok but you need to use punctuation.
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hey mrs masterson i loved the story. I like the part where she " snapped her gum smoothed her yellow bell-bottom and adjusted her wings". it just sounds so cute.plus how the girl thought of he birthday as just another day that is how i feel about my birthday.I like how the say "the size of a speck." well got to go moms calling me. makayla wood
Hey I liked the part where she "snapped her gum and smoothed her wings so you could see her wood stalk T-shirt."It sounds just like me or any other teenage girl,always having to make sure our outfit is PERFECT and we are ALWAYS chewing gum.It made alot of sence to me when Tina said"this is the time for you to experement and see who you are."Of coarse my mother would never let me dye my whole head pink with a blue stripe,or jet black.
-Shelby
Hey I liked the part where she "snapped her gum and smoothed her wings so you could see her wood stalk T-shirt."It sounds just like me or any other teenage girl,always having to make sure our outfit is PERFECT and we are ALWAYS chewing gum.It made alot of sence to me when Tina said"this is the time for you to experement and see who you are."Of coarse my mother would never let me dye my whole head pink with a blue stripe,or jet black.
-Shelby
i hated the story it sounded like girl story but it did have good storyboard and characters.
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ya i did not really like that story it was not that good like when the story is about fairysh peoplesh things and the girl that thinks of her day as a nuther day man that is werd but that is how it was for me but i was still happy i was terning theerteen so ya
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i like she is a teenager not an old lady. in the movies the fairy's are all ways old. But i still think that the first story we read ways better. your student makayla wood
I thought this story was created to remind people that growing up is a big deal and should be token seriously.And if ever went to fairy teen land i would work my moves on some of those hot fairies :D
I thought this story was created to remind people that growing up is a big deal and should be token seriously.And if ever went to fairy teen land i would work my moves on some of those hot fairies :D
:kierre
The story is about a fairy and a girl how is about to tearn thirteen but she dose not want to, so the fairy taks her to teen land and convises her that being a teen is good. the fairy shows her her parence and there mestacs.
patrick
Dear Mrs. Masreson,
i loved this story i thought it was funny how it menshuned the parts about the mistakes her parents had once made.i also liked the part when Tina the teen fairy said the the faries switch what they like as much as we do. it was a great story.
Sierra
I think it was an ok story but a bit strange. I thought it got good at the begginning but towards the end it was not very good. :)
Austin Brown
I personally like this story and the idea behind it. It was a creative topic that teenagers could relate to. I like how they claim that teenager years are the experimenting years, and how she looked back on her mom with the pink hair and the dad was in a band, it would be cool to see my parents at that age!
I think the teen fairy is one hundred times better than the tooth fairy!
-Katy Ainsworth
I liked the story over all but some parts were a little weird, it didn't make much sence when she was being told she would be taken to teen land and that she wouldn't rember it, like how would the person know if she wouldn't rember? I tought it was a ok story but not really my favirote.
-haley
dear mrs. masterson,
i didnt really like this story very much. i dont understand why she wouldnt want to be a teenager. The whole fairy thing was weird. I dont like fairies that much.. maybe if they changed the characters and the main idea i'd like it better
KESSLEA
ya kind of weird i dont care for faries more for orcs and goblins and drunk dwarfs myself. but it was ok you know not the best storey i evver read. I would read it agan if i had to for a assingemint but ya
- ben
one more thing teens do experemint but not like job experimint but thats the pg way to put it i guess and how was she not tierd after onleying having like 20 minutes of sleep? enney waise ya sorta weird
- ben
i did not like the the story Tina the teen fairy but I felt the same way she did on her birth day and I could image a teen age fairy with pink hair. olijawan
i liked the story about, " tina the teen fairy".my favorite part was when maia and tina were watching the videos of maia's mom and dad. this made me think of my mom,she said that when she was in high school their was 'crazy hair day' at her school and everyone contributed to this.
i think that the main idea of this story is that becoming a teenager is not just like being able to go see pg 13 movies...but it's about learning from your mistakes and having responsibilities.
~ashley dunham
mrs masterson
i liked this story. it gave a good veiw on what happens when we become a teenager. i liked the part where tina snapped her gum, smoothed her yellow bell-blottms and adjusted her wings. its a very good description of what she was doing.
~rachael~
i liked this story, it was ok. i liked it better than epicac. the concept was kinda wierd but kinda cool to. tina the fairy seemed petty cool. i liked the part when she came through the window.
-cassie
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