daegens I DREAM POEM

I dream about a happy life
it makes me feel good

I dream about video games
it is what i do

I dream about my famile
they feed and help me

I dream about straight A's
because I don't think it will happen

by daegen

Dream poem

i dream about music
that makes me happy

i dream about music
that i love

i dream about music
that is my life

without music im no more



Dylan A

tina the teen fairy

dear mrs. masterson

i really liked this story it was really good.and the the 13 year old girl didnt belive in any thing and the moral of the story was good but i tough epicac was better then tina the teen fairy

Tina the Teen Fairy

Mrs.Masterson-

I really liked the morale of this story, how Tina the fairy had to make a going-to-be 13 year old girl who didn't believe in anything besides what she saw with her eyes. I liked it because it was easy to follow and picture, where as EPICAC was harder to relate to and understand. I liked the light hearted sense I got from reading this story. It was gooooooood.


BY Katie Fowlds

Dream Poems

Thanks for the beautiful poem Kesslea to start us off! So what do y0u think about dreams? Do you believe that if you want a dream bad enough that you can make it come true? Langston Hughes who wrote these poems had many reasons in his life to give up. He is amazing to me because his need and desire to create in writing could not be drowned by the hardships he faced. May it be so for all of us!
Mrs. M

Dreamer, Superhero Extraordinaire

If dreams are the diamonds
on the souls
of our shoes.
The sparkle
and
the SHAZAM!
Then all of us
old
or
young
Are super heroes.
Breathe deep
the beauty
of life.
Let it
be
your steady diet.
See yourself
living
your dream.
Let
nothin
steal your thunder.
Keep your
eyes
on the prize,
you!

Mrs. M

Dreams Poem

Dreams give love
So we can soar

Dreams give happiness
So we can be excited for life

Dreams take away hurt
So we can forgive and forget

Dreams give hope
So we can make it to the next day



KESSLEA

i liked this story about tina the teen fairy i thought that it wasnt that realistic and kinda babyish but overall i thought it was good story. i didnt understand why you wouldnt remember it and just not tell anyone.






Dylan A

tina the teen fairy

i liked this story about tina the teen fairy i thought that it wasnt that realistic and kinda babyish but overall i thought it was good story. i didnt understand why you wouldnt remember it and just not tell anyone. if my mom died her hair pink that would be insanly kool.
p.s. jocylen happy birthday in 9 days ill probebly forget about it so im saying it now


-shane e boi

I think Tina the Teenage Fairy was a really cool story.I'll be turning 13 in 10 days,so it has more meaning to me.I like how Tina shows Maia all her mom's CRAZY hairdos...I wonder if my mom ever had pink hair????? I agree with Maia in that you don't have to decide what you want to be when you get older.I have a few ideas of what sounds fun to do as a job ,but nothing is set in stone. After reading this story it makes me wonder if a fairy will swoop down at midnight on the 28th and teech me about being a teenager.



~Jocelyn~

Tina, the Teen Fairy

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EPICAC

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